literature

everyone dies

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Literature Text

"breathe,"

he tells her, because
    her lips are bluer
    than her eyes

that is all he can
think to say-

their hands stem
into each other
like cross-stitches,

lily-white and
puckered with veins


and

    "breathe, you have to breathe."


{she can't
hear him
over her
own
singing}

"mm," she hums
and it comes out
like broken song,
melodies stripped
of their warmth,
    thin and hopeless-

like a piano
of bones.


"okay." he says,
tracing her skin.

time is running
on weeping
heels,
and its
like he's
looking
at her
from behind
    a wall of glass

all he
can do is
watch as she

    d i s a p p e a r s


"there's rain
in your hair."
he gasps, because
the sky is bluer
than her lips
which are bluer
than her eyes


and they
are closing,

slowly,
gently-

her hair is
as wet as his eyes,

and all he can think
to say
this time
is

    "oh,"
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:iconthewrittenrevolution:
1. does formatting take away from the meaning? does it add to it?
2. does the poem make sense?
3. is the repetition helping/hurting the poem?
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PossumFan's avatar
Lovely work! Great job!

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